The Enchanted Dagger #5 – Page 2
Losing page 18 because Golden Age EDag #1 was 7 pages instead of 6 pages meant that I had to squeeze things in, evidenced here on a wordy page two. I had intended for the Stillface/Mr Porq exhange to last over 3 pages, which would have spread out the dialogue. I’m certainly not afraid of words and It’s been something of a theme to front load the issues with text, but I do try to appreciate the word balloons as part of the composition and not let them over power the artwork, unless it’s for a good cause.
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