See what i mean about RSP’s work getting tighter.  You go back to the first few pages he drew and they were a lot sketchier.  I think it will work out that this and the previous page will create a two page spread.  The mirror images will make for cool composition with the two long landscape panels opposite each other.

Initial work is wrapping up on MTPHM!  Part one anyway.  I’m not breaking any speed records for a 16 page story that’s for sure.  And this is just the pencils.  So it’s really only half done.  But, I’m taking my time with it and giving it the full architectural treatment.  I’m also trying not to produce anything that I hate, knowing that it would irritate for the rest of my life.