Enchanted Dagger #1 – Page 14
Every once in a while theres a page that really gnaws at you and this is one of those. I think its because I didn’t give the bar scene up top enough definition in the drawing phase. I also intended to go in and give the floor some tiles but I think it slipped my mind. Oh! and the ceilings! I really should have tightened them up more. And the lights. They’re all different shapes. Why? I can’t remember. And the light itself. Couldn’t I have done more with the lamp light? And the daylight for that matter? I think it turned out good enough but it still bugs me because I like the writing here. Lots of good words.
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